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Shear Determination

by

Kelly Ronayne​

On occasion, a few sheep went home with bloodied heels at the end of the day. That was to be expected—just part of the business.

But Finn’s reputation was built more on eyes and agility than teeth. With one steady gaze, the black-and-white border collie could direct a hillside of stubborn rams and tenacious ewes into a single, shifting, woolly cloud. He circled low and silent, save for a sharp, purposeful bark, nudging even the most wayward along. Only when warnings failed did he nip.

Up and down the wild green hills of New Zealand, Finn worked in seamless partnership with Sheila. Her whistle sliced the wind, her hands deft with the crook, her praise warm and certain. Flock, dog, and shepherd all moved to a single rhythm—until disease swept through, emptying the valleys of sheep and leaving only bramble and silence behind. In farms across the countryside, neighbors mourned the loss of their flocks like vanished kin.

Without work, the days grew restless. Sheila cleaned, mended, and took worried walks.

At night, she turned a chipped mug at the kitchen table, thoughts drifting far away. Then she began making lists, scribbling onto scraps—tallying what she could spare and piecing together a new way forward. Finn pressed his nose to her knee. He paced at the threshold, glancing at theempty hills, searching for purpose.

Her savings dwindling, Sheila loaded a wagon with relics from the past—a clock, a kettle, some candlesticks—and staked her hopes on the village market. “Well, lad,” she murmured, ruffling his head as they walked to the square, “let’s find our way again.”

Early mornings meant hauling, fussing over the arrangement of baubles on worn linen, and pinning price tags.

Later, the lanes filled with a different flock—vendors squabbling over tablecloths, boys darting through stalls, customers in tweed caps hunting bargains. Sheila adjusted her wares, arranging and rearranging the patchwork of her past, awaiting the hagglers. Finn sat at her feet, eyes sharp and steady.

Instinct took over. When a knot of bargain-hunters drifted toward a rival stall, Finn slunk under tables, weaving between boots and baskets until, by some subtle herding magic, they shuffled toward Sheila’s kettle. When someone lingered too long next door, he traced an arc around them, steering their steps back to her linen. A crisp bark sent one dithering tourist straight to the clock—and drew a surprised “Oi!” from another who ignored a soft bump to the ankle.

By midday, the regulars moved in neat—if bewildered—patterns. A farmer with hay in his cuffs haggled over the clock, then paid before he realized. Sheila’s table grew crowded; laughter and coins passed hand to hand. Finn watched with the keen look he once gave the flock, and now and then Sheila ruffled his ears in thanks.

At day’s end, a few villagers—those who ignored Finn’s warnings—went home with bloodied heels. That was to be expected—just part of the business.
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